Le Sang des Sirènes

Last week I finished Le Sang des Sirènes, a crime / thriller novel by French author Thierry Serfaty. At 250 pages and fairly large typeface, it was a quick read. I completed it over the course of 10 days in my usual evenings and weekends pattern. The book was published in 2000 and the plot is centered around industrial espionage and immunology research (intrigue around the hunt to find and profit from a cure for AIDS). Some combination of the modern publication date, my history working at a pharmaceutical company, and my having read a lot of French crime literature likely explain the fact that nearly all the vocabulary was familiar to me. I noted 24 novel words in the first 100 pages or so and then decided just to finish the book without pencil in hand.

This is Serfarty’s first novel. Although it won that year’s Prix Polar for best crime novel from the Festival Polar de Cognac and launched Serfarty’s successful literary second career as an novelist and television screenwriter (he originally trained as a doctor), I didn’t think much of the book. 

Le Sang des Sirènes starts with an innovative framing. The prologue is a first person narrative where we meet Jan Hellberg, a recently murdered Danish immunologist. He tells us that, as a scientist, he doesn’t believe in reincarnation. Still, the fact remains that he died in a car crash, and then a spirit – named “Life” – came to him and showed him a mysterious hand sabotaging the brakes hours before. So he’s forced to reconsider his views on the hereafter.

Life offers him the chance to relive the last 6 months of his life in order to discover who had arranged his murder. However, he won’t have any power to change the course of events, and he won’t be able to remember the future details of his life as he retraverses those 6 months. He’ll only be able to remember this bargain he’s made with Life, and to pay closer attention to who might have wanted him dead and acted on that motive. Then he can at least die with the solace of knowing who killed him and why.

I really liked the prologue. Witty, introspective, fresh. Unfortunately, everything goes downhill from there. The main character never really gets developed, and the other characters are cardboard at best. There’s an awful lot of telling and not showing. The pacing is erratic, with long science explanations interspersed with breakneck reversals: “person X is good – no wait, they’re evil – just kidding, good after all.” Many of the Dan Brown novels and their emulators (e.g. The Da Vinci Code) suffer from these same flaws, and feel like they are conceived as movies that happen to have been packaged as novels. It doesn’t surprise me that Serfaty went on to write television screenplays. Also, the cellular biochemistry explanations fall wide of the mark. They add nothing for the reader who knows the material, and I can’t imagine they are satisfying or interesting to the reader who hasn’t seen this since high school.

Le Sang de Sirènes had been sitting on my shelf unread for several years. The price printed on the back is «98,00 F TTC» : 98 pre-euro French francs, all taxes included (recall that the Euro was launched in 1999, but existed only as an invisible currency until coins and banknotes appeared in 2002). I purchased it for $1 from the French Cultural Center of Boston at one of their semi-annual book sales. There are no library markings on it, so I conclude that it was a member donation rather than a library de-acquisition. I’m glad to know that the FCC librarians didn’t think this was worth purchasing in the first place. It’s the sort of book one might imagine picking up in an airport before a long flight and being glad of the in-air diversion. Amusingly, I found nestled in the back a boarding pass stub for an Air France flight 062 from Charles de Gaulle airport, Paris, to LAX, Los Angeles. It includes the name of the passenger, but «la pudeur» restrains me from outing them here.

I’m actually being too hard on the book. It was good for reinforcing vocabulary and for practicing automaticity generally. I noticed several words from my previous post on Le Pendu de Saint-Pholien show up in this novel. So I don’t regret starting or finishing the volume. But I won’t be seeking out other works by Serfaty.

One detail remains: how could a book with these flaws win a literary honor like Prix Polar for best crime novel from the Festival Polar de Cognac? For that, I think one needs to understand the French cultural phenomenon of «La rentrée littéraire». Several years ago a teacher shared with me this video from ARTE. It’s worth a watch:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sZ4J1oPLkMg

In short, the French seem to love contests and competitions, and there is a tradition of literary prizes that dates back to the start of the 20th century. The earliest and most prestigious of these is the Prix Goncourt, but many others soon followed. Every fall there are a couple of months of closely watched announcements of various books and authors progressing to the next stage for candidate novels for this or that award. The final winners are announced in time to take full advantage of Christmas sales. The winning books are all displayed with red paper bands wrapping them and shouting the name of the award. 

Perhaps more so than in the US (or perhaps not), there’s more than a whiff of theater and self-dealing involved with these awards. The judges are typically authors, and frequently select winners that work with the same publishing houses as themselves. But moreover, the whole thing is as much about marketing as it is about merit. As a result, there is a proliferation of awards and everyone is a winner. In the specific field of crime novels, there are some two dozen annual contests, and many give multiple awards.

In the future, I may trust the recommendations emanating from Cognac more for choosing my brandy than for choosing my reading material.

Here’s the list of unfamiliar vocabulary words I noted:

expression (root)Frequency in 2010
emprunter1 in 23,500
jurer1 in 41,100
chaussé1 in 58,000
arborer1 in 135,000
ronger1 in 142,000
frange1 in 180,000
fléau1 in 199,000
brider1 in 208,000
jalonner1 in 242,000
toiser1 in 279,000
cribler1 in 328,000
rançon1 in 339,000
retrousser1 in 508,000
compatir1 in 517,000
languir1 in 528,000
gabarit1 in 631,000
tonitruant1 in 672,000
hâle1 in 727,000
déboule1 in 767,000
ogive1 in 771,000
carnassier1 in 1,090,000
bâillonner1 in 1,140,000
lésiner1 in 1,340,000
guimbarde1 in 4,460,000
se morfondre1 in 4,980,000

Word Notes

  • une guimbarde is a rare word with multiple meanings. It can denote a musical instrument (a “Jew’s harp”), an old junky car, a 17th-century two-step dance, or a small plane used by a carpenter (a rabot !). In this book, it meant a car. The word frequency was fairly stable in the Google Books corpus at 1 in 20 million from 1800-2000. Then it experienced a sudden jump in between 2003 and 2012, rising to about 1 in 4.5 million, where it has stayed since. Alas, I don’t know which of the meanings has reemerged.
  • lésiner means to skimp or cut corners. It’s been getting steadily more frequent for 200 years. I looked into the possibility that it was connected to the English “lazy”, but the etymologies are completely different.
  • tonitruer is “to thunder”, both in the meteorological sense and in the metaphorical sense of speaking loudly and with anger. Curious that the language has both «tonner» and «tonitruer» with apparently the same meaning. I’m not sure if they carry different connotations.

Common words, uncommon meanings

  • emprunter means “to borrow”, of course, and is routinely a beginner word for the classroom. But it can also mean to take a route or a path to get around: «J’emprunte les escaliers qui mènent à mon bureau.»
  • jurer commonly means to swear, either in the sense of “avow” or in the sense of “curse”. But it can also mean “to clash” or “to conflict”: «l’élément qui jure dans un ensemble harmonieux».
  • la chaussée derives from the word «chaussure», “shoe”. The verb «chausser» means to put shoes on someone or something, like a horse. It can also mean to put tires on a vehicle, which I find a pleasant and consistent evolution of the word. But as a noun, «la chaussée» is a roadway, carriageway, highway, or more generally the pavement. This of course is related to the expression for the ground floor of a building, the «rez-de-chaussée».

Technophile ou technophobe?

This week’s French lesson included an oral comprehension activity pulled from the site Partajon. It features a 6 minute audio clip about attitudes towards technology: love it, hate it, fear it, welcome it (Technophile ou Technophobe?). It’s rated C1, and I had no difficulty understanding the overall arc of the discussion and most of the specifics. When I turned to the accompanying worksheet to test comprehension, I discovered that I had missed a few details like title of a book referenced and some neologisms for new concepts in the intersection between sociology and technology. But on the whole I could listen and understand this clip with «les doigts dans le nez» (a new expression my teacher supplied me today).

I have a knack for remembering English conversation close to verbatim for a short time after I hear it, and it’s always bothered me that my ability to do this in French is pretty much non-existent. I can completely understand what is being said, and I can talk about it confidently afterwards, but I can’t parrot back the exact sentence or use the exact phrase that I heard just a minute or two earlier the way I can in English. But it’s starting to develop bit by bit. And I am getting better at remembering the structure of a wide-ranging radio conversation: what was talked about first, what second, what examples of each point were provided, etc. It feels good.

Vocab list: Le Pendu de Saint-Pholien

I just finished reading George Simenon’s 1931 novel Le Pendu de Saint-Pholien, the fourth adventure of the famous commissaire Maigret. It spans 122 pages in the “Tout Maigret” edition from Omnibus and took me 18 days of occasional bedtime reading to get through. I noted 78 unfamiliar words as I read. I’ve posted them below, with links to definitions from Linguee and word frequencies from Google Books NGram Viewer.

The novel is only OK, at best. It’s got a murder, two suicides, extortion, forgery, a secret society, assumed identities, and just a soupçon of anti-semitism. Plus, part of it takes place in Germany, so you get Simenon’s impression of that country in 1931 – an interesting time in Franco-Prussian relations. On the whole it’s not much of a mystery, more like a convoluted tale of Bohemian youth gone wild that Maigret happens to stumble upon long after the fact. There’s no sense of danger and little intrigue. But I still have no hesitation about turning the page and diving into the next novel in the tome.

The unfamiliar words are disproportionately about poverty: worn out fabrics, falling apart shoes, cheap suitcases, dilapidated shacks, dirty neighborhoods, ruffian children, low quality merchants. Also a moderate amount of industry: torches, saws, acid baths, printing presses and workshops. There’s a little bit at the other end of the wealth spectrum: flowery scarves, bribed high officials, fancy cars, banking deals, patented systems, savored brandy. And finally there’s a lot of highfalutin descriptions: chiseled features, fleshy limbs, jerky movements, burnished tables, crimson faces and so on.

Here’s the list, sorted by modern word frequency. Recall that the value is estimated by counting all words in all French books Google knows about in the given decade. For comparison, the masculine definite article le occurs with a frequency of 1 in 60, while all the union of all articles (le, la, les, un, une, de, des) taken together account for 1 in 8 words. I don’t have on hand the estimate of what number of distinct French words have a frequency greater than 1 in N, but I’m interested in finding that distribution at some point.

expression (root)Frequency in 2010Frequency in 1970Frequency in 1930
bassin1 in 36,7001 in 25,6001 in 24,700
combinaison1 in 47,0001 in 36,4001 in 30,600
maintes1 in 68,4001 in 45,5001 in 37,200
trame1 in 84,5001 in 110,0001 in 144,000
sanguine1 in 99,0001 in 86,6001 in 52,600
revers1 in 105,0001 in 105,0001 in 108,000
ébaucher1 in 126,0001 in 77,5001 in 74,000
friser1 in 159,0001 in 158,0001 in 124,000
sangle1 in 255,0001 in 264,0001 in 239,000
butin1 in 261,0001 in 267,0001 in 262,000
huissier1 in 263,0001 in 176,0001 in 122,000
éparpiller1 in 266,0001 in 391,0001 in 402,000
âpre1 in 277,0001 in 186,0001 in 122,000
morne1 in 287,0001 in 216,0001 in 148,000
hétéroclite1 in 325,0001 in 621,0001 in 901,000
pignon1 in 398,0001 in 386,0001 in 233,000
échevin1 in 416,0001 in 207,0001 in 159,000
saccade1 in 426,0001 in 554,0001 in 465,000
humer1 in 452,0001 in 642,0001 in 607,000
parvis1 in 532,0001 in 820,0001 in 767,000
boyau1 in 576,0001 in 631,0001 in 427,000
breveté1 in 594,0001 in 487,0001 in 294,000
honnir1 in 622,0001 in 1,000,0001 in 924,000
charnu1 in 632,0001 in 508,0001 in 331,000
encastrés1 in 730,0001 in 549,0001 in 427,000
cambrer1 in 749,0001 in 1,210,0001 in 1,070,000
espiègle1 in 753,0001 in 2,000,0001 in 1,640,000
frileux1 in 759,0001 in 1,490,0001 in 1,250,000
fourgon1 in 787,0001 in 1,010,0001 in 907,000
jonc1 in 892,0001 in 589,0001 in 475,000
taudis1 in 906,0001 in 561,0001 in 529,000
chope1 in 927,0001 in 2,730,0001 in 3,080,000
cramoisi1 in 936,0001 in 1,210,0001 in 738,000
fatras1 in 992,0001 in 887,0001 in 757,000
écheveler1 in 1,010,0001 in 1,060,0001 in 977,000
glaise1 in 1,010,0001 in 821,0001 in 728,000
copeaux1 in 1,040,0001 in 706,0001 in 758,000
quincaillerie1 in 1,180,0001 in 738,0001 in 1,470,000
fusain1 in 1,370,0001 in 1,980,0001 in 1,330,000
sommier1 in 1,400,0001 in 988,0001 in 1,060,000
cabanon1 in 1,450,0001 in 3,710,0001 in 3,590,000
camelot1 in 1,450,0001 in 1,190,0001 in 954,000
astiquer1 in 1,690,0001 in 2,260,0001 in 2,880,000
pègre1 in 1,700,0001 in 2,210,0001 in 4,490,000
canif1 in 1,720,0001 in 1,740,0001 in 1,440,000
miteux1 in 1,820,0001 in 3,910,0001 in 8,080,000
brocanteur1 in 1,920,0001 in 2,290,0001 in 1,880,000
échancrer1 in 1,960,0001 in 644,0001 in 373,000
buriner1 in 2,140,0001 in 2,270,0001 in 2,340,000
s’emballer1 in 2,160,0001 in 11,500,0001 in 11,100,000
pelisse1 in 2,170,0001 in 1,680,0001 in 1,070,000
chalumeau1 in 2,190,0001 in 1,030,0001 in 808,000
ventru1 in 2,200,0001 in 1,550,0001 in 1,010,000
grisettes1 in 2,420,0001 in 2,730,0001 in 1,740,000
fadeur1 in 2,450,0001 in 1,330,0001 in 865,000
ramage1 in 2,520,0001 in 1,680,0001 in 1,160,000
lascar1 in 2,560,0001 in 5,810,0001 in 7,400,000
effilocher1 in 2,730,0001 in 3,070,0001 in 3,900,000
genièvre1 in 2,910,0001 in 3,420,0001 in 2,360,000
lutrin1 in 3,440,0001 in 3,600,0001 in 2,600,000
capharnaüm1 in 3,670,0001 in 26,600,0001 in 25,500,000
rabot1 in 3,770,0001 in 1,770,0001 in 2,070,000
papier de soie1 in 4,540,0001 in 6,740,0001 in 3,870,000
s’amorcer1 in 4,640,0001 in 3,180,0001 in 7,530,000
enchevêtré1 in 6,850,0001 in 6,780,0001 in 5,270,000
rapin1 in 7,260,0001 in 4,310,0001 in 2,510,000
lavallière1 in 12,500,0001 in 12,400,0001 in 13,000,000
empeigne1 in 14,500,0001 in 10,800,0001 in 7,260,000
émerillon1 in 17,300,0001 in 15,300,0001 in 14,600,000
varlope1 in 18,800,0001 in 15,300,0001 in 10,500,000
oxhydrique1 in 67,600,0001 in 36,200,0001 in 13,500,000
T.S.F1 in 97,800,0001 in 311,000,0001 in 104,000,000
gueuse-lambicNone1 in 8,600,000,0001 in 2,270,000,000

Word notes

  • lambic is a kind of beer that ferments spontaneously. gueuse-lambic is a mix of old and young lambics – two great tastes that go great together, apparently.
  • une empeigne is the leather upper of a shoe. Turns out there’s a whole lot of parts to a shoe, whose names I don’t know even in English.
  • un varlope and un rabot are two kinds of planing tools for woodworking. I had some trouble understanding from the definitions how they differed, and apparently it’s subtle. I stumbled upon Rabot ou varlope? , which you can consult for details.
  • une grisette is a condescending term for a low-class shop girl or other under-employed young woman who is generally considered sexually available. This character and characterization was fairly well established in French culture, art, and literature for a couple hundred years, including learned debates around what did and did not make one une grisette. Ick.
  • un camelot is a street merchant of cheap manufactured goods. According to Wiktionnaire, the etymology comes from the Arabic word for the animal – “camel”. This is the modern evolution of the itinerant desert trade. I don’t think there’s any connection with King Arthur’s castle. The name Camelot appears in medieval French romances, and there is a Roman ruin named Camuladonum which is thought to be the origin of that.
  • écheveler is to cause something to become disheveled. We need an English word for that. I guess the best we have is “rumple”, though I suppose you can use “dishevel” as an active verb.
  • sanguine is a reddish color, but also a sketch made with a crayon of that color.
A sanguine drawing

Common words, uncommon meanings

  • un bassin means a basin or cistern, but here it was used in the anatomical sense to refer to the collection of bones that make up the pelvis. The Bohemian youth keep a display skeleton around their attic hangout for who knows what reason.
  • une combinaison is a combination in the mathematical, or a coordinated outfit in fashion, but also means a scheme or an arrangement for accomplishing something vaguely shady.
  • la trame is the thread that goes back and forth on a loom – the “woof” in English. It is also used to mean a web of activity going on around someone/something. But in this novel it is used in describing someones clothing, so worn that you could see individual threads.